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This is a monologue I was assigned for my Drama class, with the following guidelines:

1.) Pick a person {superhero, politician, celebrity} who is well known and has "more to say."

2.) Do a biographical sketch (get inside their head)

3.) Write a monologue that will last for over a minute about what they never had a chance to say.

I chose Angelus, from the second season of the Buffy series. He never kills her, even when he had multiple chances. And I wanted to make him seem a little shmoopy about why he didn't kill her.

This isn't really done right now, but I am working on it.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
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:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

hn. . .its fantastic so far, you could always go off on a tangent about how things are different for Angelus because of the problem that he had a soul for that time. . . how it's affected his ability to kill that certain girl. how his subconcious is bothering the shit outta him and it shouldn't even exist. pretty much expand on the stuff you have thus far and i'm sure you'll be fine. it's quite impressive thus far. you could add more wide gestures and stuff, since Angelus is quite dramatic as well. the more actions you have in something, the longer it will take to say, and the less monologue you'd need.